The doldrums strike again. I don’t really feel like writing or drawing or doing much of anything right now, but this just came to me so I wrote it down.
Recent critique to group submission [link]
I placed this in the Free and Blank Verse category because one or two lines in each stanza don’t rhyme. Do you find free verse poetry to have less impact than traditional fixed forms? Would this flow better if I made those lines rhyme with the others?