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Found Poem - Scare Me by ~Leonca:iconLeonca:



You...
                             don't
                                                         want
                                                                                     to
                                                                                                            know.












Scare me.
©2009 ~Leonca
:iconleonca:

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For the July edition of :iconsimplypoetry: Form prompt, Found poem

A Found Poem is a piece not intended to be a poem, but discovered in a newspaper article or magazine, or from bits of conversation, or even from the contents of a note, then announced as such by its finder.
The finder may not change, add to, or omit words, but may choose its arrangement of line breaks and punctuation.


Another one from my quote book. The first line was said by my sister, and the second was said by my brother. Just a funny scrap of conversation collected many years ago. =p

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:icontashagladwell:
I think of the two poems you submitted for this prompt, this is my favourite. The "Scare me" at the end can be interpreted to be honestly quite terrifying and chilling, or could be part of a very funny conversation, so I like that mystery :) Also, extremely good use of line breaks here, it makes it really sound like a conversation, great work! :)

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"No one has ever gained wisdom by studying material that only reinforced their own predetermined ideas." - Jim Marrs
:iconleonca:
Thanks. =D I love experimenting with word placement.

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Five exclamation marks, the sure sign of an insane mind. - Reaper Man (Terry Pratchett)

By saying that you are afraid of the wolves, you admit to being a sheep.

Sombra avatar by Leopreston. He’s agoona getcha! :evillaugh:
:icontashagladwell:
You're very welcome :)

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"No one has ever gained wisdom by studying material that only reinforced their own predetermined ideas." - Jim Marrs

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